Wednesday, November 02, 2005

My Stabb'd soul

my stabb'd soul
like a crushed black rose
you'll never tell me you love me.

my stabb'd soul
the mirror shows my pain
pink ribbon scars always there

my stabb'd soul
you'll never even care
this stabb'd soul, was stabbed by you


Thats a poem ive been working on. i showed it to my friend alyson and she said i ripped off the pink ribbon scars bit from billy corgan. but i totally didnt.

2 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

hey,
your poetry is immensely unoriginal.
i hope, for your sake, that this is a joke website,
and you don't really exist.
otherwise, young people scare the shit out of me,
and i'm nineteen.
listen to Drive Like Jehu ... it will cure the emo,
because it is real emo.

12:25 AM  
Blogger Courtney said...

Don't be such a dick. my poetry is original i think because its whats INSIDE me and no one else. I write it for myself. Ive never heard of DLJ but ill check em out. anyway my bands are REAL emo too. Like my chemical romance and newer greenday stuff.

10:54 AM  

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