l'haine
hate like a cancer
contagious, growing
the internet a web like a spider weaves
negativity is trapped in it and grows
like a cancer
a tumour of anger
the masks people hide behind
as they pass judgment upon others
it doesnt hide their patheticness
it doesnt hide their emptyiness
their hate is just a reflection of a god they never knew
a reflection of pieces of them self
meanwhile the cancer grows
more people become enfected
and it
just
keeps
growing.
I tried to space it out so it was a visual poem and it looked like a web, but it didn't work.
(the title is french for hate. i learned it when i did french last year)
hate like a cancer
contagious, growing
the internet a web like a spider weaves
negativity is trapped in it and grows
like a cancer
a tumour of anger
the masks people hide behind
as they pass judgment upon others
it doesnt hide their patheticness
it doesnt hide their emptyiness
their hate is just a reflection of a god they never knew
a reflection of pieces of them self
meanwhile the cancer grows
more people become enfected
and it
just
keeps
growing.
I tried to space it out so it was a visual poem and it looked like a web, but it didn't work.
(the title is french for hate. i learned it when i did french last year)
posted by Courtney at 11:07 AM
14 Comments:
I'll pass judgment when and where I fucken want
MY JUDGEMENT:
Your a little fag fuckwit emo cunt.
Hows that cocksucker
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MY JUDGEMENT II:
Your poetry is fucked!
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MY JUDGEMENT III
Your a dumb cunt, go kill yourself and save us all the pansy shit you come out with
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MY JUDGEMENT IV
Your mums a fuckin whore
Bye
Pathetic= Crying at song lyrics, then thinking you are somehow superior to others
Emptyness= Spouting hate at your family, and resigning yourself to a fucking stereotypical group that are just as stupid and "conformist" as the bogans you resent. You are not an individual, you are a perfect Emo stereotype.
And don't criticise us for using anonymous, I don't waste my time bitching on a blog on a consistant basis like you do, so that is the profile I use.People like you shit me, you whinge how bad life is ( you'll look back and see that it isn't) and you don't do squat about it. How about talking to your step-dad why you resent him? He actually sounds a fairly decent bloke the way you've presented him. I think you're just taking out the rage you feel of not being with your real dad on him. You've got some deep seeded issues- you NEED help, whether it be from a professional or not. You are filled with much more hate than the people who have replied so far; they don't hate their family and the entire world around them like you do. You do need help, don't deny this by thinking your superior. Think about this before coming up with your knee jerk reaction of "I don't let society dictate me!" bullshit.
And how the fuck are we meant to know you're even real, its the internet! I'm wouldn't be the least bit shocked if this is a satirical site anyway...
I'll leave my name if it makes you happy.
-John
Such hate, man. Those outbursts prove the truth of your poem, Courtney. So tender, so sensitive.
Wow. thats really, really, really, SHIT.
This blog isn't for real is it?? No one alive could be such a setereotype.....right?
I could forgive the irritating content, but honestly, your spelling and grammar is criminal.
i'm pretty sure its closely
related to Tanyawah's blog, which i'm pretty sure is also a parody.
still, courtney is a fuckbrain.
And who the fuck are you anonymous people to criticise such a beautiful kid?
if by beautiful, you mean fucking stupid, immature and no real world experience, then we are the people doing the criticising.
if by beautiful, you actually mean beautiful, well, er, i suggest you need to evaluate your understanding of beautiful
I beleive you are real Courtney, a satirical site could not be so full real life and the reality of being a teenager and dealing with all of life's bullshit. You are the voice for a lot of us youth today who put up with crap for trying to break away from conformity.
I hate that people come on here and criticise you for being different and being in touc with your feelings. It is something to be proud, not ashamed of.
i thought of a cool similie in english class once,
'we are like two tears lost in the rain'
i wish i could right poetry like you, i would probably put that in one. you can use it i don't mind, but thats how i felt when i read your poem. thank you u touched me in places i have never been touched except by my grandfather.
he was a poet too. he's dead now.
i'd rather stay anonymous because i feel shy about stuff like this.
courtney wot skool do u go 2? i liv near burra plaza 2 n I think u sound like a nice sweet guy. i go 2 loyola. nun off da guys in my class r as sensitive as u so i bet u dont go to my skool. do u hav a gf yet?
u shod just b tru 2 u courntey n forget wot da hatas say bout u. ur a special butterfly in a horrible world. der shod b mor guys like u.
xxxxxx
tahnee
no, no, courtney does not have a gf. I don't think his dad would let him.
he enjoys pounding courtney in the ass too much.
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ahahah. awesome post.
god i love that there's so many people who like taking the piss out of courtney.
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